Rate this rap verse please?

"succeed in his quest to become the best until.." for that line, so your doing gods quest? its not your quest? that line doesnt make much sense...it would be more like it was gods plan for you.., but your destiny and YOUR quest. But id rate it a 8 out of 10. Not bad...its pretty good...but next time, give a guideline on what to rate it on....*originality, metaphors, flow* etc....not just lyrical content.